Fairy Tale : Poor boy...

Once upon a time, there was a bad influenced kingdom with a cruel king. All the castle people were poor habitants because the king didn't respected their lifes, put high tax, and he didn't helped them when they asked it to him.
One night, ayoung boy went to the lake near the castle and felt to a deep dream. While dreaming, he saw strange things, and one of them was a talking rat which came near him.The rat said that one day the boy will try to kill a rat, so if he won't kill the rat, hiswisheswill come true. Then the boy woke up and ran to his house.
Next week while he was eating a piece of bread with cheese, a rat grabbed a bit of it, but the boy caught the rat quickly. He wanted to kill it , but then he remembered the dream. So he left the rat go away.
Next day he went again to the same lake and felt in a deep dream, the rat came to him and asked for his wish, the boy said that he wanted to be the new king of the kingdom, so he could help his habitants. The wish came true, the boy became the new king , and nobody knew what happened with the bad king. The new king made new laws, and everybody was happy with him.

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Observation of my Oral Presentation:

My Oral presentation is called Dance. Well i had a power point as a resource, and i included some images. I think that all the class liked my oral presentation, and the timing was more that 6 minutes, so it was good enough. Also i tried to make eye contact , i didn't read from my notes, and i tried to move a bit from one side of the class to the other side.
My presentation had a structure and i included some markers. I think it's new information, i tried to speak slowly and at easy level, so the others could understand me. I searched some information in Wikipedia about origins of the dance and some styles. My language wasn't so difficult, maybe i did some mistakes, and I'll try to don't make them in next presentation. My pronunciation was quite good, i think that's because I'm from other country, and my fluency was not bad in deed. I made pauses to take a breath , and I hadn't changed my voice.
I think that my presentation is worth a 7.

Oral presentation: Dance

Movie opinion , Bruce almighty

The movie starts with a guy called Bruce that suffers all his bad things, and calls God help, the God helps him, until he loses his power and his love.
I think that this movie isn't so bad to see in house with all your family, also its funny and silly because the house problem, is the dog, that doesn't stop pissing the tv or the sofa , until Bruce gots the power and makes the dog piss in the bathroom. I liked the movie, but it was a bit difficult to understand all his words.

Football

All footballers have a high skill in the stadium while they're trying to score goals. Maybe thats why some league clubs pay very high ammounts of money to a really good players. I think that it doesn't depend on all of the skill that a player has, but also the way that he scores goals, steals balls, and passes the ball at good positions to his team. Other thing that i don't like of the football is that the players are so childish, when they recive a fault they fall down at the grass, do some spins and shout loudly, like the fault is very painful. And in few seconds they stand up like nothing has happened, i hate that!
Other thing that i don't like, everybody heard that Cristiano Ronaldo came to R.M. because theywere offering 90 million Euros for a human, and the things that he will do in new club is win some matches and score goals, but my question is , Do they really are so expensive?
My answer is no, and i dont think so that they are like gods and some club will pay to him such money for his skill. They could use this money, send it to poor arican people , so they can eat and drink water, or the hospitals can give them medicine or vaccines.

BBC News -Indonesia quake deaths pass 450

Last wednesday ,at Indonesian island , a powerful quake has token more than 450 lifes. The catastroph began at 10:30 pm situated at the ocean near Padangs coast. This quake destroyed more that 500 houses and buildings, this quake was very intensive with 7.6 magnitude, a disaster woken in Sumatra's region. But that wasn't the end, other quake with 6.8 magnitude appeared few hours after the first one. Well there are no clues about more caused damage by the second quake. It affected me in the way , that a powerful quake killed so many people and caused a big dissaster. Well the people around me , are impacted about what happened , and sad to the lost familiars . BBC News WebPage