Oral presentation - Racism

Observation of oral presentation:

For my oral presentation I used internet to look up the info. I think the information was good summarised and attractive, and the audience laught in some cases. I tried to keep the eye contact, and don't read everything from my notes, but some definitions were difficult so I looked a bit. To keep my audience paying attention, I tried to change my voice into higher or funnier, also including funny photos and examples.
Between that, I organised well my information in order of importance, and I had to include more discourse markers.
My information was new and relevant, so they paid attention while I was explaining it to them. This helped me to concentrate and keep with the exposition. My grammar was fine, but it was bit poor and I had to use more linkers and fillers.
My pronounciation was good enough and I tried to change my voice, including some breaks to get started next point. Well In my opinion I think I'm worth of 7. =)

Oral presentation : Jamaica

Observation of Presentation:

We included in our presentation a PowerPoint, also sound and images which made more interesting the presentation. They helped in our presentation to show where the things were and the music introduced all to the Jamaican ambient. Our presentation last 9 minutes and half, well that's because we tried to speak slowly and with good pronunciation, so the others could understand us good enough. I tried to make a visual contact with audience and I tried to don't keep reading all the time my notes, well some difficult words , nothing more. I should improve my gesture and body movement. The structure of the presentation was very good , and our introduction to the presentation was a bit bad I think so. As I said before , we tried to include a good explication of each thing , and we included some examples as we were talking. Our language wasn't difficult and I think that we could look to dictionary to make the vocabulary rich and varied. I think I hadn't problems with pronunciation , well with the word " island" , I'll try to change my voice and don't speak too much time monotone. I made breaks while I was talking, to remind what I'm going to talk next. Well I think our presentation wasn't so bad, my mark is 6,5.

Observation of my Oral Presentation:

My Oral presentation is called Dance. Well i had a power point as a resource, and i included some images. I think that all the class liked my oral presentation, and the timing was more that 6 minutes, so it was good enough. Also i tried to make eye contact , i didn't read from my notes, and i tried to move a bit from one side of the class to the other side.
My presentation had a structure and i included some markers. I think it's new information, i tried to speak slowly and at easy level, so the others could understand me. I searched some information in Wikipedia about origins of the dance and some styles. My language wasn't so difficult, maybe i did some mistakes, and I'll try to don't make them in next presentation. My pronunciation was quite good, i think that's because I'm from other country, and my fluency was not bad in deed. I made pauses to take a breath , and I hadn't changed my voice.
I think that my presentation is worth a 7.

Oral presentation: Dance