Oral presentation - Racism

Observation of oral presentation:

For my oral presentation I used internet to look up the info. I think the information was good summarised and attractive, and the audience laught in some cases. I tried to keep the eye contact, and don't read everything from my notes, but some definitions were difficult so I looked a bit. To keep my audience paying attention, I tried to change my voice into higher or funnier, also including funny photos and examples.
Between that, I organised well my information in order of importance, and I had to include more discourse markers.
My information was new and relevant, so they paid attention while I was explaining it to them. This helped me to concentrate and keep with the exposition. My grammar was fine, but it was bit poor and I had to use more linkers and fillers.
My pronounciation was good enough and I tried to change my voice, including some breaks to get started next point. Well In my opinion I think I'm worth of 7. =)